Wednesday 26 January 2011

brother - back to M

hmmm...

have i missed anyone? could be, anyway, i told my brother D - whilst @ home last weekend, and that was good - it became apparent that the 2nd payoff had to be a different kind of payoff to the original payoff... the truth that becomes apparent slowly and fairly easily, as opposed to what may become the final payoff (the end of the book) which has to come much harder & more suddenly...

i've been thinking about it alot, (even though i have a mound of marking to get through right now), & i even started thinking that maybe... aaah... but how much do i tell you? do i describe events that the reader will find out later?

tricky... ok - so  let's leave it for now,

i met someone today - a bus driver - who writes, i wanted to tell her - but i didn't get the courage together to ask for her number or give her mine - and she was only on a tiny break & couldn't hear it there & then...

also i went back to the big green bookshop today - saw T's bicycle outside & was ready to tell him, but he wasn't in, M was there - who i've told the story already to, so we had a chat & it was helpful to talk it over with him again, with less detail... although honing in on a couple of details...

x

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